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Liz <3's avatar

You wrote this so perfectly… 🥹🥹

xins ꩜ ᶻ 𝗓 .ᐟ's avatar

AHHH such high praise 😞 thank you lizzie!!! 🫶🏻🫶🏻

theinkspilled's avatar

I love the paradox here, that 'home' isn't a place, but a person you’re constantly running with. The line 'no one would believe that you are a wanted fugitive' really stayed with me. It paints such a clear picture of an 'us against the world' situation that feels both romantic and terrifying. Truly evocative writing.

xins ꩜ ᶻ 𝗓 .ᐟ's avatar

aww thank you ☹️ and yes i was trying to bring across the message that home is anywhere as long as we had each other!! i’m glad you enjoyed this as much as i enjoyed writing 🥹 THANK YOUU

diana's avatar
Feb 2Edited

she is a KPOP STAN AHHHH !!!!! loved reading this poem, what a beautiful and heart wrenching poem:(

xins ꩜ ᶻ 𝗓 .ᐟ's avatar

YES I DEFINITELY AM!!!! thank you for reading diana 🥹🤍