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Rey's avatar
Mar 5Edited

oh love 😭 this is so freaking beautiful oml wtf 😭🥹 this is the quintessential high school romance love story… and gosh do you do a beautiful job of articulating that scenery of day - that imagery of the story with the two people being on their little high school date… jeez man, xins, you’ve done such a wonderful job with this poem! fantastic work!

xins ꩜ ᶻ 𝗓 .ᐟ's avatar

AHHH thank you so much rey 🥹 you’re so sweet and yes this is what id imagine a high school romance to look like hehe 🤍 couldn’t experience it but imagination exists for a reason you know

Rey's avatar

oh yeah well i just mean in general, the two people being on their after school date, should probably fix that wording

sanika ✶'s avatar

ohhhh i love this so much 🥹🥹

you captured the experiences of a high school romance perfectly 🥹🥹🫶🏼🫶🏼

xins ꩜ ᶻ 𝗓 .ᐟ's avatar

aww thank you love 🥹 never experienced it but this is definitely how it’ll look like hehe

Annie's avatar

This is so beautifully written. It perfectly depicts the kind of high school romance i wish i had🥺💕