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Scarlett's avatar

"don’t mistake

my

kindness

for

foolishness."

I love poetry because it takes less time to forge strong words like you did, than prose does. But anyway, you're an amazing poet, essayist, rolled into one Xins!! Your poetry reminds me of my own version that still lives inside!

xins ꩜ ᶻ 𝗓 .ᐟ's avatar

AHHH 🥹 you’re so sweet i’m glad you liked it hehe 🤍sending lots of love~~

Scarlett's avatar

Muah muah hehe 💗💗

Rey's avatar

oofffffff ok this hit pretty freakin’ hard…

xins ꩜ ᶻ 𝗓 .ᐟ's avatar

thanks hehe 🫶🏻 it was a pretty satisfying one to write about

Veronica 💌's avatar

Ooooh this line right here

“how ironic it is

to say my

parting words

in the space

you first made

my heart

race”

Bittersweet, but I like this one! ♥️

xins ꩜ ᶻ 𝗓 .ᐟ's avatar

eeks thank you ver 🤍 this one hit pretty hard as i was writing, and im glad you liked this hehe 🥰 ILOVEYOU!!

Calley Overton's avatar

gorgeously written as always!! also making excuses for somebody else is so real

xins ꩜ ᶻ 𝗓 .ᐟ's avatar

awwies thank you so much calley 🥹🤍 your support means the WORLD. and yeah don’t we all, at one point in time, when they mean the world to us? 😞

theinkspilled's avatar

“i still remember

your subtle nod

and smile—

all for me

unaware that

i was here

to draw

blood”

This piece is brilliant! I could see the whole scene flash before my eyes every line of the poem. Loved tho piece❤️‍🔥

xins ꩜ ᶻ 𝗓 .ᐟ's avatar

EEKS thank you so much 🥹🤍 i love adding imagery to my poems hehe